Editorial on Confucianists and Qin Dynasty 2nd Draft

During the Han Dynasty, there were a lot of things going on all at once. For example, the war with the Confucianists and the Qin Dynasty. It should have been a longer war and there should have been more killing to make the war more intense. One person always does the killing and does all the work and his name was Gaodi. He had a brave heart and suffered for many of his troops.

Gaodi kept fighting and fighting until it was all over. He kept on changing the rules. All his ideas confused me and made me wonder what he was talking about. All the Confuciansists wanted their payback and they got that.

The setting of this war was in Western Han. It was all land and no buildings. It was almost like you were in the middle of a desert with barely any air around you. At the end of the war, you could see all the dead bodies on the ground with blood surrounding them. After the war, there was a lot of silence that you could almost hear your own echos.

This war was a really important historical event because there was a lot of action from the beginning to the end of the war. Even though there was a lot of things that could have been changed, it was a great war to read and learn about.