One of the most important and beautiful monuments in China is the Great Wall of China. It is located in the northern part of China. It was originally built to protect the northern borders from invaders. It's history has shown to help with China's security and to keep invaders out of China's area.
The Great Wall of China is a very beautiful piece of work and it has a thick and long amount of brick that they put. A cool thing is that you can still see the thin cracks of how old the wall is.
The Great Wall of China winds up and down across deserts, grasslands, mountains, and plateaus that stretches about 8,851.8 kilometers from east to west of China. The Great Wall that people still see today was built during the Ming Dynasty (1368-1644).
The construction of the Great Wall of China is amazing. It drew heavily for construction materials, and it was carried out with bad conditions. A great army of manpower, had soldiers, prisoners, and local people built the wall. file:///Users/student/Desktop/30%20-%20Great%20Wall%20of%20China.jpg
The Great Wall of China is a huge part of China's culture. The most well-known legend was the collapse of the wall caused by Meng Jiangnu.
All these reasons and examples all explain why the Great Wall of China was one of the most important and beautiful monuments in China's history.http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcThhrqE6mojUouVs5d-ZKacENFwjkmfkr0RR8R1fUgduFBNIgHE
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